Self Defence (Poster)
WALT : show what we have learned during our self defence lessons.
Today I have created a DLO for my self defence and I have tried to make eye catching, I didn't add to much facts actually and I hope you like it.
As you can see in my DLO I have added photos around my face because how it makes it more creative and I made the DLO more wider so it can fit and I have added a little facts in my DLO because how Miss Komor said don't add to much because how no one won't read the poster anymore.
Anyways in my DLO I have added pictures that makes my DLO eye catching like the girl smack the guy that makes my DLO eye catching. I found challenging this DLO is the facts that I should put in my DLO because how I have lots of facts and I can only put down 2 facts which is 2 things I learned in self defence. I didn't found challenging is making my DLO creative so it will make it more perfect. I need to work is making my words more sense because how my facts doesn't actually make sense but I will be fixing my facts.
What could I improve on?
- Making my sentence more sense
- Be creative in my work more
- Here is my Dlo
As you can see in my DLO I have added photos around my face because how it makes it more creative and I made the DLO more wider so it can fit and I have added a little facts in my DLO because how Miss Komor said don't add to much because how no one won't read the poster anymore.
Anyways in my DLO I have added pictures that makes my DLO eye catching like the girl smack the guy that makes my DLO eye catching. I found challenging this DLO is the facts that I should put in my DLO because how I have lots of facts and I can only put down 2 facts which is 2 things I learned in self defence. I didn't found challenging is making my DLO creative so it will make it more perfect. I need to work is making my words more sense because how my facts doesn't actually make sense but I will be fixing my facts.
What could I improve on?
- Making my sentence more sense
- Be creative in my work more
- Here is my Dlo
I really enjoy self defence actually and I really miss the self defence lessons because how I wanna learn more. I have a photo of us.
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