Self Defence (Poster)

Self Defence (Poster)

WALT : show what we have learned during our self defence lessons.

Today I have created a DLO for my self defence and I have tried to make eye catching, I didn't add to much facts actually and I hope you like it.


As you can see in my DLO I have added photos around my face because how it makes it more creative and I made the DLO more wider so it can fit and I have added a little facts in my DLO because how Miss Komor said don't add to much because how no one won't read the poster anymore. 

 Anyways in my DLO I have added pictures that makes my DLO eye catching like the girl smack the guy that makes my DLO eye catching. I found challenging this DLO is the facts that I should put in my DLO because how I have lots of facts and I can only put down 2 facts which is 2 things I learned in self defence.  I didn't found challenging is making my DLO creative so it will make it more perfect. I need to work is making my words more sense because how my facts doesn't actually make sense but I will be fixing my facts.
What could I improve on?
- Making my sentence more sense
- Be creative in my work more 
- Here is my Dlo

I really enjoy self defence actually and I really miss the self defence lessons because how I wanna learn more. I have a photo of us.

Have fun!
Many thanks!