Writing time!

Writing time!

IALT : reflect that it's now writing time.

Now it's now time for writing time and i am doing my explanation writing. Also love finishing my work and trying my best to finish all of my work.

I am excited to be finishing my work.

This the work that i finish.

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XPLANATION TEMPLATE

Remember the S.E.E.E structure

S	Statement - Use a starter sentence to state a cause - To be a good scientist you need to be . . .
E	Explain - Define the cause - this means . . .
E	Example - connect to the reader - for example...
E	Effect - explain the effect of the cause - if you do that then . . .

Title This will start with HOW... or WHY...	A place of whanaungatanga - The local Park.
Introduction What are you going to explain?  How will you hook the reader in?	The park is a place that you can have fun and you can also make friends when you play at the park.The park is a great place to go out with your family. That's why I decided to pick the park for showing whanaungatanga to different kinds of people even tho they are different to you
Paragraph One What is your first statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)	In the park you can make friends and if you want to make friends you need to be friendly and kind.  You can also show Manaakitanga when someone gets hurt, for example if they fall down and cry you can go help them. It can effect them in a better way because how you're helping them instead of just looking at them and walking away from them.
Paragraph Two What is your second statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)	You can encourage others in the park and let them play even if they are lonely, for example if you're playing a game you can encourage your team instead of telling them to hurry up.This can also affect them in a happy way because how you're cheering for them instead of screaming to them.
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Conclusion The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end.  This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.	In conclusion the park is a great place to show whanaungatanga. Why because how It is a place where kids get together to play on slides and swings and is also a place where teams come together to play sport. A park is a positive place to go and show different types of school values such as manaakitanga , tukumarie/rangimarie , Ako and Whanaungatanga.The park is a great place.

I hope you like this. I was learning too make my explanation writing cooler. 

Many thanks!