WALT: comment on different types of school that is part of the Manaikalani Team.
Today's blog is about........
-Cyber-Smart-
In the Kia Manawanui syndicate we have been working on a subject called Cyber-smart. So what we did on our Cyber-smart lesson is we have to comment a thoughtful,positive & a helpful comment to different types of school that is part of the Manaikalani Team, we have to take a screenshot of our comment if it's a thoughtful comment then u put it in the thoughtful column.
So here is my thoughtful,positive & helpful comment.
So here is my thoughtful,positive & helpful comment.
So here is my thoughtful comment...
So as u can see I commented on Bianca blog posts about her reflection about going in the movies. As u can see I added some questions and I also added about what I loved about her reflection.
So here is my positive comment...
So as u can see by the comment I commented about her reflection in the pools. I forgot to add her name in my comment, The only thing is I need to also add more facts about myself and I haven't even add any facts about me.
So here is my helpful comment....
So as u can see I commented about her wanting to achieve her goal which is knowing her 1000's division. I also added some helpful comment that she needed to work.
So all of those comment that u saw was I need to think about what I need to comment that relate to an helpful,thoughtful & positive comment.
What I found challenging for this task is to think about what kind of comment that relates to the topic helpful. I also found challenging is to pick which is school I should comment on.
What I didn't found challenging is helping them improving their blog posts and asking question's about what they found challenging & more.
[Questions]
How's my blog posts?
Is it bad or good?
Here are the questions that u can answer my readers:D
-Don't forget to comment down below-
Many thanks!
Did you know that teachers are learners too?!?
ReplyDeleteI have learned that instead of thinking of things as 'good' and 'bad' I now think about 'Things that I am doing well' and 'Things that I need to improve'.
When you are leaving comments, you could try being more specific so it is clear what you loved about someone's reflection.
I also liked that you asked others questions. This gives them something to think about.
Let us know if you have any questions 😊
Hi Ms.Komor,
DeleteThank u for giving me a feedback to what I need to work fix in my blog posts. Also Ms.Komor what questions should I add in my blog posts?
Thanks xD:D