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WALT: Freestyle write about an image..

Freestyle,writing

Today our teacher asked us to write a story about a picture. This is what I wrote. Tell me what you think in the comments bellow. Enjoy!

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Starting point - The wind rushed through her hair as she descended the mountain of great speed. For most children this would be an exhilarating, even terrifying experience, but for Lucy it was just a ordinary journey to school.Her house was on top of the mountain and dangerously go to school. The zip-line was her biggest enemy to school, it was scary, terrifying, as u look down the deadly lake is like eating u, she rushed as she was exhilarating.

At last she arrived, she was relieved and excited to learn. Her friends was so happy to see her but they didn’t know the struggle of her going to school. She walked to school and say good morning to all teacher. As she sat down, her desk was full of doodles, that says she was ugly and has a drawing of her ugly face. She cried’’ as people laughed at her, her friends tried to calm her down but eventually she cried even more.

The teacher finally walk in, people were quit as she was crying. The teacher asked if she was alright? One of her friends told everything that happened, eventually the bullied got in trouble.Now the lesson finally start, she was happy to learn and excited.When the school finished at 4:30 , she was sad because she loves school more than home and she loves learning.

The end.. Thank u!

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